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		<title>Kobayashi Haiku</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2011/04/14/kobayashi-haiku/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2011 07:12:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Earlier this school year, 5923 Quarterly published my short story Hiccup. This past Saturday I wrote a slightly-nerdy poem called &#8220;Kobayashi Haiku&#8221; (the name is a parody of the dreaded final exam in Star Trek&#8217;s Starfleet Academy)(and yes, I am proud to remember the name of the test). The poem was selected as a featured [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Earlier this school year, 5923 Quarterly published my short story <a href="http://www.5923quarterly.net/issue1/hiccup.html">Hiccup</a>. This past Saturday I wrote a slightly-nerdy poem called &#8220;Kobayashi Haiku&#8221; (the name is a parody of the dreaded final exam in Star Trek&#8217;s Starfleet Academy)(and yes, I am proud to remember the name of the test). </p>
<p>The poem was selected as a featured work on Thin Air Magazine&#8217;s Writers&#8217; Challenge site. <a href="http://thinairchallenge.blogspot.com/2011/04/featured-selection-kobayashi-haiku-by.html">Go check it out here</a>.</p>
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		<title>Love That Dog by Sharon Creech</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2011/02/28/love-that-dog-by-sharon-creech/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Feb 2011 18:58:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today I thought I would put up a review of I Am Number Four, check out some books, and help a class with iMovie. I&#8217;ve done that, but I also read Love That Dog. I read it in under an hour and while completing those previously mentioned tasks. Love That Dog is great. It&#8217;s a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Today I thought I would put up a review of <a href="http://briangriggs.com/2011/02/28/i-am-number-four-by-cough-pittacus-lore/">I Am Number Four</a>, check out some books, and help a class with iMovie. I&#8217;ve done that, but I also read <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0439569869?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=briangrcom-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=9325&#038;creativeASIN=0439569869">Love That Dog</a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=briangrcom-20&#038;l=as2&#038;o=1&#038;a=0439569869" width="1" height="1" border="0" alt="" style="border:none !important; margin:0px !important;" />. I read it in under an hour and while completing those previously mentioned tasks. </p>
<p><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0439569869?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=briangrcom-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=9325&#038;creativeASIN=0439569869">Love That Dog</a><img src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=briangrcom-20&#038;l=as2&#038;o=1&#038;a=0439569869" width="1" height="1" border="0" alt="" style="border:none !important; margin:0px !important;" /> is great. It&#8217;s a simple story about a boy writing poems in class and his teacher&#8217;s reactions. We have to infer her reactions because we&#8217;re only getting one side of the story.</p>
<p>The entire book is in verse, which helps make it a quick read. What I especially loved, though, is the inclusion of eight other poems from published authors. The main character makes commentary on each one. My favorite?</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8230;who wrote about<br />
those snowy woods<br />
and the miles to go<br />
before he sleeps &#8211;<br />
well!</p>
<p>I think Mr. Robert Frost<br />
has a little<br />
too<br />
much<br />
time<br />
on his<br />
hands.</p></blockquote>
<p>So great. I sometimes see in YA fiction references to other YA works. Avi&#8217;s reference to <em>The Outsiders</em> in <em>Nothing but the Truth</em> is a prime example of this. In <em>Love That Dog</em>, the main character reads a poem from Walter Dean Myers. He loves it so much that he writes to Walter Dean Myers to see if he can visit their school. I think I&#8217;m just as much of a fanboy as the fictional protagonist and would love for Myers to visit our junior high. (Just like in the book, we have a clean school full of mostly nice kids.)</p>
<p><em>Love That Dog</em> is a little bit older (it was published in 2001), but if you have it on the shelf and haven&#8217;t read it yet, it&#8217;s a definite must.</p>
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		<title>All the Broken Pieces by Ann Burg</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2010/09/13/all-the-broken-pieces-by-ann-burg/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Sep 2010 16:35:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Historical]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[I will be honest: I judged All the Broken Pieces by its cover. It has a baseball on the cover and a Language Arts teacher told me it was a good book, especially for boys. I was skeptical because I knew it was a verse book and, even though I love verse books, I know [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I will be honest: I judged <em>All the Broken Pieces</em> by its cover. It has a baseball on the cover and a Language Arts teacher told me it was a good book, especially for boys. I was skeptical because I knew it was a verse book and, even though I love verse books, I know that the direct market for verse books is girls.</p>
<p><em>All the Broken Pieces</em> challenges that. Yes, baseball is not much of the story; protagonist Matthew must confront his memories of fleeing a war-torn Vietnam, so emotions and the conflict versus self are the main focus of the story. But how is that different from <a href="http://briangriggs.com/2009/07/16/march-toward-the-thunder-by-joseph-bruchac/">March Toward the Thunder</a>? That one is marketed to both genders, but I know more boys check it out. </p>
<p>Burg&#8217;s verse format actually helps the narrative. One characteristic of <a href="http://briangriggs.com/2008/04/23/i-heart-you-you-haunt-me/">verse novels</a> is that, when written well, you can finish them in one sitting. That&#8217;s the case here. I kept turning pages, just one more segment of poems, wanting to know more. That process repeated all the way to the end. </p>
<p>This is a well-told story about the effects of the Vietnam War on the soldiers, on the US homefront, and on the people of Vietnam. If you&#8217;re looking for something like <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0439148901?ie=UTF8&#038;tag=briangrcom-20&#038;linkCode=as2&#038;camp=1789&#038;creative=9325&#038;creativeASIN=0439148901">The Journal of Patrick Seamus Flaherty</a>, this is not it and you won&#8217;t hear much about squad combat. You will, on the other hand, hear what it&#8217;s like to have napalm dropped on your village. The thing I appreciate, though, is that Burg does not take sides. She presents the effects and lets you draw your own conclusions without being preachy.</p>
<p>This is a great debut novel from Ann Burg and I&#8217;m excited to see more.</p>
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		<title>Science Limericks</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2009/09/10/science-limericks/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Sep 2009 20:00:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[To set up your hypothesis Make an informative guess For what you will try To be like Bill Nye And live a life of success. Limericks have a specific structure for rhyme scheme and rhythm. The rhyme scheme is A &#8211; hypothesis A &#8211; guess B &#8211; try B &#8211; Nye A &#8211; success So [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>To set up your <strong>hypothesis</strong><br />
Make an informative <strong>guess</strong><br />
For what you will <strong>try</strong><br />
To be like Bill <strong>Nye</strong><br />
And live a life of <strong>success</strong>.</em></p>
<p>Limericks have a specific structure for rhyme scheme and rhythm. </p>
<p>The rhyme scheme is<br />
A &#8211; <strong>hypothesis</strong><br />
A &#8211; <strong>guess</strong><br />
B &#8211; <strong>try</strong><br />
B &#8211; <strong>Nye</strong><br />
A &#8211; <strong>success</strong></p>
<p>So in the sample above, notice that <em>hypothesis</em> and <em>guess</em> rhyme, <em>try</em> and <em>Nye</em> rhyme, and then I bring the rhyme back to <em>success</em>, rhyming with <em> hypothesis </em> and <em> guess</em>. Limericks need to stick to the AABBA rhyme scheme to be a traditional limerick.</p>
<p>For the rhythm part, to keep it simple let&#8217;s just say that lines 1,2, and 5 are the longer rhythms and 3 and 4 are the quicker rhythms. </p>
<p>Tradition has it that limericks started out in <a href="http://www.bing.com/maps/default.aspx?v=2&#038;FORM=LMLTCP&#038;cp=52.6616~-8.632793&#038;style=h&#038;lvl=12&#038;tilt=-90&#038;dir=0&#038;alt=-1000&#038;phx=0&#038;phy=0&#038;phscl=1&#038;where1=limerick&#038;encType=1">Limerick, Ireland</a> (sounds believable enough) and that the poems have their roots in a certain type of song.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s a brain-teaser limerick from  Kay DeVicci and <a href="http://www.aps.org">aps.org</a>:</p>
<blockquote><p>The sum of 3 numbers is 4;<br />
The product is (-2) more;<br />
The sum of their squares,<br />
If anyone cares,<br />
Is just 14 less than a score.
</p></blockquote>
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		<title>I Heart You, You Haunt Me</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2008/04/23/i-heart-you-you-haunt-me/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Apr 2008 18:05:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Horror]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great verse book by Lisa Schroeder. If students like Sonya Sones and Kelly Bingham, this is the next book that they need to read. It&#8217;s a different twist on the whole mourning/ghost story-type book.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great verse book by Lisa Schroeder. If students like Sonya Sones and Kelly Bingham, this is the next book that they need to read. It&#8217;s a different twist on the whole mourning/ghost story-type book.</p>
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		<title>Your Own, Sylvia by Stephanie Hemphill</title>
		<link>http://briangriggs.com/2007/11/20/your-own-sylvia-by-stephanie-hemphill/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Nov 2007 18:36:41 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[a natural lyrical gift &#8230; Rarefied as Rembrandt, a student like this appears once Your Own, Sylvia is probably one of the most accessible biographies for students. Hemphill does a great job presenting the birth and death of Sylvia Plath. The Beautiful There are lots of interesting details, presented in a way that is intriguing. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<blockquote><p>a natural lyrical gift<br />
&#8230;<br />
Rarefied as Rembrandt,<br />
a student like this appears once</p></blockquote>
<p><a href="http://phoenixbookcompany.com/cartgenie/prodInfo.asp?pid=2948&amp;cid=9" target="_blank">Your Own, Sylvia</a> is probably one of <strong>the</strong> most accessible biographies for students. Hemphill does a great job presenting the birth and death of Sylvia Plath.</p>
<p><strong>The Beautiful</strong></p>
<ol>
<li>There are lots of interesting details, presented in a way that is intriguing. (I never would have pictured famous poet Sylvia Plath as a guard on the high school basketball team.)</li>
<li>Each little snippet is a poem &#8211; but a fictionalized poem by one of the people that knew her. The above quote is from Wilbury Crockett, her high school English teacher. But what&#8217;s extremely cool is that this quote uses words that Crockett actually said.</li>
<li>The accessibility/readability of the book helps to paint a bigger picture of her life and motivations. The footnotes amidst the poems help to put events in historical context.</li>
</ol>
<p><strong>The Tragic</strong></p>
<ol>
<li>Sylvia Plath ended her life violently. The book leads up to this, but does not paint it as the focal point of her life.</li>
<li>There are no traditional paragraphs, only poems and footnotes.</li>
</ol>
<p>Fans of <a href="http://www.phoenixbookcompany.com/blog/?p=31" target="_blank">Sonya Sones</a> or <a href="http://phoenixbookcompany.com/cartgenie/prodInfo.asp?pid=2987&amp;cid=9" target="_blank">Kelly Bingham </a>will definitely enjoy this.</p>
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